My Biography
My name is Alex Lozano I’m 18
years old I like to play videogames sometimes I like go shopping and go out
with my friends. Well I used to be a good child because a had good behavior I
had visited tarapoto when I was 8 years but my mother told me that it was when
I was a baby so I don’t remember it. I have been studying at ICPNA, on the
other hand I want to study in Cesar Vallejo because I want to finish quickly
but I think by the time I turn 19 I will have been studying in Cesar Vallejo or
maybe preparing and also finishing ICPNA. English helped me in many
opportunities, for example I’m teaching children on a school but its difficult
because some days I would work more hours that I deed, I remember by the time I
got the job I had prepared because the interviews but when I got it there were
some kind of situations that I didn’t like for example my mom had been calling
me when I walk up but my children are amazing and I’m getting experience that’s
what I love and sometimes it makes me feel good
My
situation
I was studying in 3042 primary
school I was finishing it I haven’t already chosen a new school to study, I
remember I chose trigozo school, I wanted to enter but you had to take an exam to
enter also I used to be a good student I didn’t have problems with that but
also I studied a lot and I thought by the time I came to the school I have done
the exam very well so that’s what I did, I did the exam very well I was very
happy because I entered, I was in shock because I remember I had been doing the
exam when I forgot some things but I did it very well, then my father called me
and told me congratulation and he gave me 2 tickets to go to tarapoto with my mother
for vacation I was in shock again I went to tarapoto, all the summer was
amazing for me then I had got back to Lima before the classes startedbut when I
went to my new school they told me that I had to subscribe because the exam was
only the first part so I didn’t enter, I was so disappointed but I learned a
lot
The most important invent of
the last 200 years
I would like to talk about
advantages and disadvantages of the iPod touch:
Advantages:
For me the ipod is a good
invention because it looks very well it has a good design also you can buy it
in different colors there are some of them
The ipod is portable because
it’s so little so you can have it in your pocked or whatever you want
The ipod has a high quality so
you can see very well
There are lot accessories and
there are some kinds of them and it works very well with the ipod
Disadvantages
You can get distract when you
are doing anything also before it there are some kind of situation that the
ipod can make you fell angry
When you have an ipod you
thing that you have everything so you do everything alone you avoid your
friends and also you parents and it makes you lazy
You can make bad habits (don’t
read, don’t talk, and don’t understand)
You can have problems when you
use it every time you can lose the way that you listen also old people can
suffer this problem so be cartful
Is
child rearing better when children pay attention to parents than parents to
children, or when the opposite is true?
In
my opinion children should pay more attention to their parents than parent to
their children, because it is the most important, you can`t ignore your child because
he is the reason of your life, he or she should be the most important in your
life also you think that it finish when they born but it doesn´t you have to
take care them, pay attention also when they are teenagers.
I
think children are not easy to care but the secret is not so difficult you have
to pay attention to then that´s not difficult is it? Just listen to then and
give then all kind of advices, that could help a lot, it is a good way to make
sure you are having a good relation with your child, you can know then they are
lying, when they feel good or bad also you can know when they have to be punish
and then in the future they will thank you
But if
you don`t do ityou and your child will have problems, because they don´t know
who they can talk to, who they can tell their problems, in who trust, finally
they talk to their friends and also they can consume drugs and that’s what you
don´t like, does you?
You
have to wake up and know that you have a family and a child who needs your
attention so you have to pay attention to then if you don`t do it you know what
could happen
The
Egyptian pyramids
The
Egyptian pyramids are so mysterious because nobody knows how was they created,
a lot of people said that Egyptians must have built them, or they may have
changed the way that they built them and another theory is that aliens could
have built them so we have a lot of theories about them but the big question is
how, is obvious that it is tall so the might have used ramps to built the
tallest part, another theory said that they were created by boulders, could
that have happened, I don’t know or they could have used brick work, another
theory said that they may have gone up with 132 boulders for a day to build the
tallest part but in my opinion that is difficult to do, well I think those
theories are true and others are false but I think research should get us
closer to an answer
Alex I think you're a intelligent, independient, honest and a great friend. Sounds good to me that at your young age you are working in something that you like and that is very nice. I study education for children and I can tell you that have moments with these kids is so cute and sweet in the world. Congratulations.
ResponderEliminarAlex, I think that you have to be careful with punctuation. You are using commas where periods should be. You have sentences that go on and on and there is no end. You have to keep in mind that you have to stop to start a new idea. Also be careful when you use connectors and verb tenses.
ResponderEliminarYes Im agree with sheyla you have problems with punctuation specially with periods also you have problems with some misuse of past tense.
ResponderEliminarI agree with Sheyla too. You must be careful with the punctuation.
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