lunes, 9 de diciembre de 2013

Patrick Bazan Navarro

My Biography
My name is Patrick and I was born in July 1998. I like to play football and listen to music especially rock, pop and rap. I study in trilce since 2009 and is the school where I'll end my high school. In my free time I like to go to Campo de Marte and spend time with my friends. I used to swim but now I cannot because my school does not  have a pool .My dream is to go to college and finish my career in engineer system. I chose this career because I like everything that has a relation with technology.
  
A situation that has turned out differently from what you expected 

When I moved to college I thought that would be a bad idea because it would lose my friends but then I understood that it was not as I thought. Then I got to know new people and I began to be more sociable and learned a lot in my new college and for that I am very grateful to my parents.

The most important invention of the last 200 years

Mobile phones are one of the most positively viewed inventions in the technological era. Considering that fact a serious question arises. Are there any advantages and disadvantages of using a mobile phone? Earlier days, when we were out of home or office, we needed to search for a public telephone booth to make a phone call. Now, we pick up our mobile phone and dial. 
It is a fact that having a mobile phone nowadays is a sort of a necessity. Mobile phones, formerly use only for making a call, was large and heavy. Along with technological development, there are smallest, more useful, have many new functions. The distance doesn’t any difference now. Wherever you go, you can make a call to college however far away he is.
It’s convenient. If you are in an accident, you can call the police or ambulance - and if the phone has a camera, you can take pictures of the accident. If you are lost, you can call for directions.
Through mobile phones you can lessen your boredom, example listen to your favorite music and as well as watching movies through downloading. Mobile phones also give us easier access on the internet. You can carry it anywhere. It has a lot of useful function like calendar, making notes, alarm clock, timer and calculator.
No doubt, our mobile phones makes our life more convenient, but as the saying goes every technology has it's equal negative side and mobile phones are not so especial to be exempted. People spend less time bonding with their family and friends.

Dead or alive?


In countless biographies of Adolf Hitler the story of his final hours is recounted in the traditional version: committing suicide with Eva Braun, he took a cyanide pill and then shot himself on 30 April 1945, as the Russians bombarded Berlin.
Some historians expressed doubt that the Führer had shot himself, speculating that accounts of Hitler's death had been embellished to present his suicide in a suitably heroic light. But a fragment of skull, complete with bullet hole, which was taken from the bunker by the Russians and displayed in Moscow in 2000, appeared to settle the argument.
Until now. In the wake of new revelations, the histories of Hitler's death may need to be rewritten – and left open-ended. American researchers claim to have demonstrated that the skull fragment, secretly preserved for decades by Soviet intelligence, belonged to a woman under 40, whose identity is unknown. DNA analyses performed on the bone, now held by the Russian State Archive in Moscow, have been processed at the genetics lab of the University of Connecticut. The results, broadcast in the US by a History Channel documentary, Hitler's Escape, astonished scientists.

5 comentarios:

  1. i don`t find any problem :) could be ponctuation

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  2. I didn't find any mistakes either. I like the way you expressed yourself. Good job Patrick.

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  3. And also could you post the last two files that I sent you, the ones that you told you had uploaded.

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  4. Me too Patrick, I didn't find any mistakes. You have used the right words, Good job.

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  5. Jorge cavero
    in a situation that has turned out differently from what you expected I think you made a mistake I the first line , I think you wanted to say I would lose my friends

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